تيجى نتكلم انجليزى

[soosoo_kotp2000]

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله

يا جمااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااعه

عندى اقتراح يا جماعه للى فى الثانوية بالذاااااااااااات

تيجى نتكلم فى الموضوع ده انجليزى

نتكلم فى اى موضوع وحتى لو اخترنا موضوع بسيط بجمل بسيطة

بس نعرف نتكلم انجليزى فى محادثات او غيره

ارجووووو تساعدونى

انا بحفظ كلمات كتير

بس بتطير منى

قولولى رأيكم وساعدونى

[one4ever]

ok i agree with you
so what is your opinion about news of the day

[soosoo_kotp2000]

Do you mean the news of Egypt nowadays?

or

my day today

[one4ever]

Current news in Egypt

and i know your home which Mohamed Gedo was born right ?

[Asmaa Kamel]

I agree with you , too...

[ranmory]

it is a great idea to improve our english

[ranmory]

lets go every one should tell us about some thing (you will told us a big pharagraph)

[ranmory]

انا سبدأ بعد اذنكم بموضوع عن مبارك و الاحداث الجاريه و ربنا يستر و اعذرنى اذا كان هناك اخطاء نحويه او املائيه و ارجو ان يصححها لى الاخرونmubark is a very smart man he treat with egyptians very carefully .in the first he build toushka project .then he buy it to forein pepole to get money . he keep peace and stole egypts money .he make it easy to watch hotbirds filmto make the yoth rude and not polit .this man is not imagine that the youth go to streets and say to him" get out egypt mubarak* ارجو ان اذكر كل من يقرا الموضوع من المسئولين ان هناك حريه للرأى و بلاش القبض عليا عشان عندى عيال بربيهم

[Asmaa Kamel]

In my opinion,the paragraph is very good.But I've some notes...
You should care of "THE CAPITAL LETTERS" on outset sentences...............
I hope you accept my opinion...............
و تقبل مرورى......

[soosoo_kotp2000]

Thanks to all for accepting my suggestion

Ranmory your paragraph is very good

I hope I can write paragraphs like it

[soosoo_kotp2000]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة one4ever

Current news in Egypt

and i know your home which Mohamed Gedo was born right ?

yes , of course

I know Geddo became famous after the African Cup of Nations

Do you know that Houch Issa has alot of footballers like geddo & Ehab Elmahs

What about the city where you born ?

[ranmory]

thank you soosoo and dana and lets me tell you about the city where i was born i was born in nasr city in 30 august 1995 nasr city was uncrowdedcity i love it alot .becouse it was quite . i made many friends. and i still rememember them. but naw nasr city have pollution . and become a sheleter for thiefs

[soosoo_kotp2000]

that's nice to still remember your old friends

I still far from my old friends 3 years (during prep school)

but now

we returned friends again

[ranmory]

soosoo and dana do you like to write an important and difficult pharagraph about massanger mohamoud or massanger esa? . if you now a big information for any massnger you will write a phargraph about him , وتقبل مرورى

[ranmory]

soosoo you are very good girl but i still remember my friends .although i did not see them for 2004 ! but they sometimes call me . naw i make new friends like my freind nadia . would you like to be my friend and e-mail me