اسئلة..

[Avada kedavra]

:Find The Mistake

the mechanic examined my car for damages-

?few members attended the meeting,did they-

i did a survey of people`s film watch habits-

buildings have been built that are not easy damaged in earthquakes

gradually means quickly over a long time -

bulling is a new social occurrence to the egyptian society-

people will get used to everything to be digital-

to be a doctor is my achieved ambition-



Choose
three one-pound coins_______on the desk-
(are - is -has been )

trees _____ in gardens for thousands of years-
(were grown- have grown)

the Cairo metro makes the areas it ____ more accessible to passengers
(travels-crosses-moves)


it is absolutely_____ that people climb mountains without oxygen
(tiring - amazing )

parents teach their children to be more ___ on roads
(keen-careful)

your English ____ better in the last few weeks
(gets-has been gotten -has gotten-got)

six people were ___ to death in the building
(burnt-left)

due to the improvements of_____,man`s life time has prolonged
(facilities -theories-activities-results)

he never forgot __ the pyramids for the time
(to see-seeing)

a team of international ___was sent to syria to settle peace
(inspectors - delegations)

poor standards of ___ mean that diseases spread fast
(sanitation-hygiene )


i have been reading about famous women,___i have found interesting
(which-what)

the new car factory will _____ a lot of jobs in the area
(generate -cause-reproduce- release)

children must try to eat____ before going to school
(sensibly_healthy- sensitively)

what is that dark thing in the sky? - it ____me a bird or small plane
(must-can`t-could)
_________________________________
موضوع للنقاش:
ايه رايك فى القصة ؟
من حيث الحوار والافكار
طبعا مستحيل تكون دى الرواية الاصلية
لان بيتم تعديلها لتناسب الدراسة
لكن مبتحسش ان الحوار فيها ضعيف جدا
اسلوب الكلام موجه لناس فى اعدادى مش فى ثانوية عامة
فى الفصل الثانى لما سابت صحى راسينديل عشان يشوف حالة الملك..ليه اول حاجة فكروا فيها انه اتسمم وان السبب كان الكعك
طب ليه راسينديل لم تظهر عليه اى اعراض بالرغم من انه اكل منها
انا عارف انه اكل واحدة..بس بما انه سم يبقى واحدة زى مية
وفى امثلة كتيير
القصة الصراحة سيئة جدا
ونرجع نقول فى الاخر مجتش ع القصة... التعليم كله بايظ

[Avada kedavra]

محدش بيرد ليه؟
ممكن اى مشرف هنا يجاوب ع الاسئلة

[aly19]

بالنسبة لاول جملة: the mechanic examined my car for damages-
اظن الجملة مفهاش غلط ولو فيها ممكن تبقى for leak

اما الجملة التانية : ?few members attended the meeting,did they- فالاجابة did not they مش did they ?
اما الجملة الثالثة : i did a survey of people`s film watch habits-
الاجابة watching مش watch
اما الجملة الرابعة : buildings have been built that are not easy damaged in earthquakes على فكرة حلو السؤال ده بس الاجابة بسيطة الغلط هنا الترتيب مش اكتر هتكون الجملة building that have been built
اما الجملة الخامسة : gradually means quickly over a long time -
الاجابة slowly مش quickly
bulling is a new social occurrence to the egyptian society ؟-
الاجابة ممكن باكتر من طريقة to تبقى in
او ocuurance تبقى beahaviour
people will get used to everything to be digital-
الاجابة حذف will get

to be a doctor is my achieved ambition-
الاجابة حذف achieved

[aly19]

بالنسبة للاختيارى :
1- are
2- were grown
3- travels
4- amazing
5- careful
6- got
7- burnt
8- theories
9- يا ربت تشوف الجملة دى لانها مش كاملة
10- delegation
11- تنفع الاجابتين اما نظافة شخصية او عامة فى كلتا الحالتين الامراض هتيجى
12- what هقولك ليه اخترت الاجابة دى لان النساء عاقل متخدش which لو كان فى فى الاختيارات who كنا هنخدها
13- generate بس الافضل save / give
مخدناش release لان معناها يحرر او ينطلق غاز من تفاعل
14- الجملة دى ناقصة لان ال3 اختيارات لازم يكون فى موصوف العيال هتاكل ايه
المفروض healthy food
15- اولا انت كاتب غلط المفروض be مش me وعموما الاجابة could والادق may / might

[aly19]

بالنسبة للقصة فهى ممتعة وانت بتسال عرفوا ازاى انه اتسمم بديهى جدا انه يكون تعب من الاكل والاكل ازاى يكون وحش الا اذا كان مسمم وبعديم قاسوا نبضه ووشه كان احمر يعنى علامات التسمم وبالنسبة ل rassendyll ففى معلومة علميتة بتقول انك لازم تاخد سم يامه علشان تموت اما لو خدت قطعة واحدة من الكيك فدى الجسم هيقدر يحللها وهتحس بتعب بسيط وانت فعلا عندك حق التعليم بايظ واى خدمة

[Avada kedavra]

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:Find The Mistake

the mechanic examined my car for damages-
اعتقد for damage

?few members attended the meeting,did they-
الجملة صحيحة لان few تنفى الجملة على عكس a few

i did a survey of people`s film watch habits-
watching

buildings have been built that are not easy damaged in earthquakes
easily damaged
or
by earthquakes
بس الاجابة الاولى افضل

gradually means quickly over a long time -
slowly

bulling is a new social occurrence to the egyptian society-
social phenomenon

people will get used to everything to be digital-
مش فاهم الجملة دى اساسا..يا ريت اى مدرس هنا يخش

to be a doctor is my achieved ambition-
lifelong ambition
وان كان مفيش علاقة بين lifelong and achieved
ممكن تبقى achievable بس المعنى هيبوظ


Choose
three one-pound coins_______on the desk-
(are - is -has been )

trees _____ in gardens for thousands of years-
(were grown- have grown)

the Cairo metro makes the areas it ____ more accessible to passengers
(travels-crosses-moves)
لو كان فى to بعد travels كان يبقى افضل على فكرة

it is absolutely_____ that people climb mountains without oxygen
(tiring - amazing )
وان كان الاثنين ممكن ينفعوا

parents teach their children to be more ___ on roads
(keen-careful)

your English ____ better in the last few weeks
(gets-has been gotten -has gotten-got)

six people were ___ to death in the building
(burnt-left)

due to the improvements of_____,man`s life time has prolonged
(facilities -theories-activities-results)

he never forgot __ the pyramids for the time
(to see-seeing)
هو معنى for the time ايه ؟
لانه هو اللى هيحدد..اعتقد لو ان معناها حتى الان تبقى to see
وان كان معناها اول مرة تبقى seeing

a team of international ___was sent to syria to settle peace
(inspectors - delegations)

poor standards of ___ mean that diseases spread fast
(sanitation-hygiene )
الاثنين صح
لكن اعتقد hygiene افضل

i have been reading about famous women,___i have found interesting
(which-what)
ترجمة الجملة.. لقد قرات عن نساء مشهورات ووجدت ذلك ممتعا
ضمير الوصل هنا يعود على اللى انا قريته وليس famous woman

the new car factory will _____ a lot of jobs in the area
(generate -cause-reproduce- release)

children must try to eat____ before going to school
(sensibly_healthy- sensitively)
انا ناقلها كده من الكتاب..!!
what is that dark thing in the sky? - it ____be a bird or small plane

(must-can`t-could
______________________
بخصوص القصة..
صدقنى لو كنت قرأت اى روايات او قصص
هتحس ان اسلوب القصة والحوار سئ جدا
فكرة القصة واضحة مش محتاجة تعليق
المشكلة تكمن فى ان النسخة الاصلية من الرواية كبيرة
واللى عندنا دى ملخص ليها
واضح اللى واضع القصة خربها
هقولك على كمان حاجة...شوف الحوار بين سابت والبنت اللى كانت عند البوابات فى الفصل الثالث
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