عزيزى الطالب تعالى و أدخل و اسأل و افهم مع درس خصوصى

[ahmed ali12345]

sports

Fancy holding my pen to write about this important topic ! Wow ! I am sure that everyone will tackle it from a different angle, but I will focus on the main points

sports are very important and useful as they keep us fit and healthy .But what sports can we do?. to answer this question we can say that there are individual sports like swimming,running and horse riding .on the other hand there are team sports like football and volleyball.Egypt full of sport champions like Abo trika and Ahmed Hassan .they are pride to their country.The ministry of sports encourage the young people to do sports.So every one should do sports and encourage other to share in the advance of our country.I hope to be the best country in sports as we the first one
Finally, I'd like to point out that what I have just written about this interesting topic is just like adding a drop of water to the ocean.1


ااخد كام على البراجراف ده يا مستر.

[Ayman M.Ebrahim]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ahmed ali12345

sports

Fancy holding my pen to write about this important topic ! Wow ! I am sure that everyone will tackle it from a different angle, but I will focus on the main points

sports are very important and useful as they keep us fit and healthy .But what sports can we do?. to answer this question we can say that there are individual sports like swimming,running and horse riding .on the other hand there are team sports like football and volleyball.Egypt is full of sport champions like Abo trika and Ahmed Hassan .they are pride to their country.The ministry of sports encourages the young people to do sports.So every one should do sports and encourage others to share in the advance of our country.I hope Egypt to be the best country in sports as we the first one
Finally, I'd like to point out that what I have just written about this interesting topic is just like adding a drop of water to the ocean.1


ااخد كام على البراجراف ده يا مستر.

جميل بس اخطاء بسيطه و انا علمتلك عليه
يعنى بداية الجمله ب capital و النهايه full stop و تاخد بالك من المفرد و بعض الكلمات اللى كانت ناقصة
الدرجه ان شاء الله حلوة

[media khalid]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ahmed ali12345

sports

Fancy holding my pen to write about this important topic ! Wow ! I am sure that everyone will tackle it from a different angle, but I will focus on the main points

sports are very important and useful as they keep us fit and healthy .But what sports can we do?. to answer this question we can say that there are individual sports like swimming,running and horse riding .on the other hand there are team sports like football and volleyball.Egypt full of sport champions like Abo trika and Ahmed Hassan .they are pride to their country.The ministry of sports encourage the young people to do sports.So every one should do sports and encourage other to share in the advance of our country.I hope to be the best country in sports as we the first one
Finally, I'd like to point out that what I have just written about this interesting topic is just like adding a drop of water to the ocean.1

هى مش المفروض تبقى others/other people

[ahmed ali12345]

طيب معلش علملى البراجراف التانى بتاع 2011 وارجووك تقولى لو بتصحح ااخد كام علشان اطمن بس

How to share in the progress of our country

Fancy holding my pen to write about this important topic ! Wow ! I am sure that everyone will tackle it from a different angle, but I will focus on the main points. Our country is one of the most beautiful countries all over the world.Every one should do his best to make egypt a better place. Many people ask,how to share in the progress of our country?. We have to encourage tourism by handling the tourists like our friends. The sellers shouldn`t exploit the tourists.The mass medias play a vital role in the advance of Egypt .They should show good models of the egyption people to encourage others to be better.The government should care about it`s scientists and reward them for their efforts to encourage them to do their best to make Egypt the most advanced country all over the would. Scientists should make new inventions .Students should study well and do their best to be scientists,doctors,engineers and good models for Egyption people .We should encourage industry ,exporting and reducing importing.I hope Egypt to be better than any time before.Finally, I'd like to point out that what I have just written about this interesting topic is just like adding a drop of water to the ocean.

[Ayman M.Ebrahim]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ahmed ali12345

طيب معلش علملى البراجراف التانى بتاع 2011 وارجووك تقولى لو بتصحح ااخد كام علشان اطمن بس

how to share in the progress of our country

fancy holding my pen to write about this important topic ! Wow ! I am sure that everyone will tackle it from a different angle, but i will focus on the main points. Our country is one of the most beautiful countries all over the world.every one should do his (their) best to make egypt a better place. Many people ask,how to share in the progress of our country?.first, we have to encourage tourism by handling the tourists like(as) our friends.second, the sellers shouldn`t exploit the tourists.third,the mass medias play a vital role in the advance of egypt,so they should show good models of the egyption people to encourage others to be better.fourth, the government should care about it`s (its) scientists and reward them for their efforts to encourage them to do their best to make egypt the most advanced country all over the would.fifth, scientists should make new inventions .sixth, students should study well and do their best to be scientists,doctors,engineers and good models for egyption people . We should encourage industry ,exporting and reducing importing.i hope egypt to be better than any time before.finally, i'd like to point out that what i have just written about this interesting topic is just like adding a drop of water to the ocean.

موضوع جميل
بس يا ريت تغير فى المقدمة شويه خليها ابسط من كده
الاخطاء الاملائية اصبحت قليلة
ارجو استخدام الروابط لتحقيق الوحدة

يعنى ممكن لو من 8 يبقى 6و نص

[ahmed ali12345]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ayman m.ebrahim

موضوع جميل
بس يا ريت تغير فى المقدمة شويه خليها ابسط من كده
الاخطاء الاملائية اصبحت قليلة
ارجو استخدام الروابط لتحقيق الوحدة

يعنى ممكن لو من 8 يبقى 6و نص[/color]

انا بشكر حضرتك جداا
وان شاء الله اكون احسن المرة الجاية.