Paragraph about Pollution, Gimme ur opinion

[Stu. MG]

السلام عليكم و رحمة الله و بركاته

دا اول موضوع ليا فى السايت, ان شاء الله يعجبكوا.. هو برجراف عن التلوث و خطورة و اضرار الكارثة القاتلة دى و ازاى نقدر نتصدى لها و هيعود علينا بإيه.

Pollution

There is no one but admits that pollution is a serious problem that threatens the lifes of all peoples in the whole world as well as the lifes of the next generations. Modern Technology in all fields has raised the rate of air, water and food pollution greatly. In the field of Industry, it has caused a colossal increase of CO2 and other poisonous gases percents in our atmosphere. We all should be aware of that dangerous increase, it surely will cause air pollution and more than normal people think. The huge increase of CO2 will cause Global Warming and that may lead many spirits to death. Governments should stimulate their peoples to do their best to reduce these percents with all possible ways. This will not only help them to breathe healthy fresh air but also will enable them to return a small favour to our mother nature! To sum this up, we all must do our best to face and overcome this fatal catastrophe to lead healthier and happier lifes.

ياريت تقولوا رأيكم فيه و لو فى اى ملاحظات اتمنى تخبرونى بها.

MG