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[الاستاذ عوض على]

قصيده " The End "

now i have to say good bye.
you have to look for another guy.
i feel it easy to die.
than live with you in a lie.
we lived together hand in hand.
no no now i can't stand.
told me,our days you have to remember.
said i ,for me isn't amatter.
now the time came.
i will not stay in this shame.
what abad mood and miserable you bring.
made me see love as abad thing.
now your plot is clear to appeare.
you will not see me again ,i will dissappeare.

[الاستاذ عوض على]

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[ابومحمدالشناوي]

Honestly
it's wonderful and subtle

[ابومحمدالشناوي]

slight note
appear, disappear
don't have "e" at the end

[Mr_HalEeM]

great really
he has a wonderful gift

[بدر السماء]

awesome. really it is a wonderful poem

[Nasr Fouad]

very wonderful