ركن السؤال و الأجابة 2

[chalijaly]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة مستر محمد ديوشي عطا

smoking

there is no doubt that smoking is a very bad habit. smoking people have increased in the last few years. they smoke 3 times or more a day. Smoking causes many dangerous diseases. first, it causes lung cancer and brain damage. second, it leads to heart shock. third, it causes sudden death. forth,it wastes money and health. the government have to prevail treatments for smoking people. mass medias play a vital role in increasing people awareness of smoking. We have to unite our efforts to wipe out smoking all over the world. Last but not least, we hope to see our world free from bad habits like smoking. Finally, i'd like to point out that what i have just written about this interesting topic is just like adding a drop of water to the ocean.

أكثر مصحح بيتلكك مش هيقدر يديلك أقل من خمسة ونصف ان لم يكن ستة

شكرا لحضرتك
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الحمد لله