[Ayman M.Ebrahim]

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sports

Fancy holding my pen to write about this important topic ! Wow ! I am sure that everyone will tackle it from a different angle, but I will focus on the main points

sports are very important and useful as they keep us fit and healthy .But what sports can we do?. to answer this question we can say that there are individual sports like swimming,running and horse riding .on the other hand there are team sports like football and volleyball.Egypt is full of sport champions like Abo trika and Ahmed Hassan .they are pride to their country.The ministry of sports encourages the young people to do sports.So every one should do sports and encourage others to share in the advance of our country.I hope Egypt to be the best country in sports as we the first one
Finally, I'd like to point out that what I have just written about this interesting topic is just like adding a drop of water to the ocean.1


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